The chart shows spending in pounds per week by age on public transport (rail,bus and taxis) in the UK in 2003.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
Given is the bar chart illustrating certain striking differences among the UK's expenditure on public vehicle measured in pounds per week in 2003, which was divided into 3 categories: Rail, Bus and Taxis. Overall, rail and taxis's spending experienced reduction through 5 stages of age. Additionally, all these 3 public transports saw the least spending at the age of 75 and over.
In terms of taxis and rail's spending, the amount of money considerably went down through 5 stages of ages. The group of age under 30 spent the largest amount of money (6,5 pound) to taxis service. Then this amount marginally fell to 6,4 pound in group of age 30-50, which was 4 fold higher than that of group 75 and over (1,7 pound). This volume of money stood at the bottom with 1,7 pound at the group of 75 and over. Aside from that, rail's expenditure accounted for the highest amount of money (3,7 pound) at the group under 30, which was five times more than that of the group 65-75 (0,7 pound). People in UK who are 75 and over spent the least (0,4 pound), which was only one-sixth compared to the spending of the age 30-50 ( 2,4 pound)
In terms of bus's expenditure, people at the age of 30-50 spent the highest amount of money (1,8 pound), followed by the group under 30 with 1,6 pound, which was 2 times higher than that of the age 65-75 did. The volume of money spent on public vehicles by the group of people at 75 and over stood at the bottom with 0,7 pound, which was only one-third compared to the group of 50-65.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 128, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ure on public vehicle measured in pounds per week in 2003, which was divided into...
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Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'taxi'.
Suggestion: taxi
...he largest amount of money 6,5 pound to taxis service. Then this amount marginally fe...
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Line 3, column 580, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... times more than that of the group 65-75 0,7 pound. People in UK who are 75 and o...
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Line 3, column 606, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...he group 65-75 0,7 pound. People in UK who are 75 and over spent the least 0,4 pound, ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ompared to the spending of the age 30-50 2,4 pound In terms of buss expenditur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.15609756098 349% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 33.7804878049 175% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1221.0 965.302439024 126% => OK
No of words: 276.0 196.424390244 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42391304348 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26980247062 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.449275362319 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 337.5 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.2793076106 43.030603864 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.1 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 5.23603664747 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193534825992 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100990192927 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554916320914 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169169893126 0.15604864568 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0973994930719 0.0819641961636 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.91 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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