Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.
Actions speak louder than words is something that we all have heard of but isn't this quote itself says something more than just a set of words. Speaking about scandals they are practical demonstration of learnings that people used to ignore. 45 minutes of harrangue speech given by the philosopher about work environment is negligible in front of the 10 minutes story of scandal happened in office. As it invovles co-workers of office and surrounding to learn from it and even discuss about it. Most of the people when it comes to life advice listen from one ear and let go of that informaion from second ear. The brains are too heavy to grasp on the advises but when it comes to heart it can hold precious learnings from scandals into it's cup. Reading or listening about scandals will take listener through a journey of different experiences and situations of scandalist. Listener could absorb the information like piece of sponge. As scandal will open up about what way to choose when it comes to a difficult situations.
Let's take an example of student counselling comittee, until an unless the drug scandal among students comes out infront of the authority and the culprits are punished there are less chances of other student for not joining the drug trafficking of school. It is essentoial to expose chicanary of diffrent scandals not just to punish a culprit but to warn people against it. Everything is according to law until and unless it has been exposed. After the scandal has been exposed the story of great adventure of a culprit becomes story of great morals which could become the basis for new laws and legislations.
Many criminal psycologist read and study glut of scandals so they could think like a criminal. philososphical words coming out of the mouth of philosopher or the podcasts designed by life influencers are just a pieces of information and something that could tell us about achieving the best and ignoring the worst. But for one to compleatly escavate from the trap of crime he or she must follow the template of scandalist who has been recovered from criminal mind. people should learn from mistakes of criminals when it comes to scandals.
It is no wonder that few scandals are created to harm the reputation of innocents but one must understand that scandals are not just an event that has happened for particular time but the saga of different life choices and of different people under different circumstances which should be studied thouroghly before claiming something directly like an advisor.
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- Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could
- Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could 50
- Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, speaking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 75.0 58.6224719101 128% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2107.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 430.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68042702215 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532558139535 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 648.9 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.3951775217 60.3974514979 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.055555556 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8888888889 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.94444444444 5.21951772744 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 5.13820224719 234% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117397206826 0.243740707755 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0402176818324 0.0831039109588 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042141293271 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0686428533636 0.150359130593 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0146399714394 0.0667264976115 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.