In some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. what is your opinion about this?
Here are few regions in the United States of America which has a night-time curfew for the adolescents who are in their teen years which prohibits them to go out by themselves during some selective time slots unless they are with an adult. In my opinion, this law is very beneficial for teenagers as well as for the parents and in the following paragraphs, I will discuss the reason for my opinion.
To begin with, the children are still very young until they have crossed teenage and hence they still should be out with an adult at night to ensure their
safety and well being. These days there are a lot of crime which takes place especially at the night when the roads are less crowded and younger people are usually considered an easy target. Due to lack of experience of the judgment of a possible threat, the teenagers often end up in trouble in the absence of an adult. In a survey conducted by the Toronto University, it was found that 80% of people who were robbed during late-night hours were of the age 19 years or below.
In addition to this, during the teenage, the children are going through a lot of hormonal changes which can hamper their ability to make wise decisions. This can lead them to misuse their freedom and engage in unsafe practices like rash driving during the night time. Many teenagers get caught up in betting and participate in illegal car race competitions when their parents are sleeping. Not only this, they also meet serious accidents. According to a study conducted by Harvard University, it was found that 70% of rash drivers at night are 19 years old.
To conclude, I strongly believe that this law is made in the best interest of the teenagers to make sure that they do not make any wrong decisions at night and also to ensure their safety during less crowded night hours. I have lived in the US during my teen years and had experienced night curfew myself so I am aware that this is done in order to keep everyone safe.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, so, still, well, as for, in addition, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55492957746 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36325437392 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538028169014 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.4101855786 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.384615385 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3076923077 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286648953451 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940886549013 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601709817753 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161204198971 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481909337365 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, so, still, well, as for, in addition, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55492957746 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36325437392 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538028169014 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.4101855786 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.384615385 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3076923077 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286648953451 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940886549013 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601709817753 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161204198971 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481909337365 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.