Having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and have more free time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is argued that to earn large compensation while less leisure time left for oneself is comparatively fine than to earn small compensation and have more personal time. Before reaching to any conclusion, it is imperative to discuss both viewpoints.
Earning more cash at the stake of personal free time is preferred by many because extra cash hell them to cater their family needs. When there is only one person in the family who can work, then he or she prefers to work extra hours so that they can earn more money. Moreover, such people engage themselves on multiple part-time jobs so that they can earn during their free time as well. As a result, they get enough money to spend on their family's financial requirements. For example, as per the recent report to by Government of India, 35% of the government employees are doing overtime and on top of their salaries, an average of 200 dollars per month are paid to these employees.
On the other hand, people think that it is fine to get less remuneration and have more leisure time because rest is vital to have a healthy body. This is because human body is not designed to work so hard; mind and body need time to heal and regain energy after working whole day. For instance as per the report by health department Delhi, to have a healthy body a person should not work more than 8 hours and should sleep attest 7 hours daily. Hence, it is preferred by many to get less cash but more leisure time.
To conclude, despite the fact that human body needs rest to be healthy, however, less money will creates financial burden on the person. I believe earning more is better because a person can easily spend money on his family needs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 98, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'create'
Suggestion: create
...to be healthy, however, less money will creates financial burden on the person. I belie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, moreover, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58415841584 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36109033579 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534653465347 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.202202607 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.846153846 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3076923077 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369924311296 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130636813343 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082408205575 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224927461457 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487601254331 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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