People today increasingly use credit cards to make monthly purchases. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages
There is no doubt that, in the contemperoy Era, more people tends to shopping with the use of credit cards has been enlarged than before. Although, there are many merits its drawbacks cannot be ignored.
Firstly, now a days, there is increased in the usage of these method on monthly basis because it offers for the flexibility of spending that no need to wait to buy what they need in necessity times. Secondly, having gradual payment is the main beneficial point of this system,which enables to roll up money in any emergency situation.
On the other hand, looking at the downside, people would have tendency to overspend or can be addicted to spending. Consequently, may lead to be faced with massive debts. Moreover, debts puts strain in families as well as less peace in mind.
To recapitulate, I personally believe that merits outnumber the demerits, however people should try to diminish the latter one.
- People today increasingly use credit cards to make monthly purchases Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 56
- In some cultures children are often told that they can achieve anything if they hard enough advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message 56
- In some cultures children are often told that they can achieve anything if they hard enough advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message 56
- In some cultures children are often told that they can achieve anything if they hard enough advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 48, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s no doubt that, in the contemperoy Era, more people tends to shopping with the u...
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Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...it cards has been enlarged than before. Although, there are many merits its drawbacks ca...
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Line 3, column 10, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...rawbacks cannot be ignored. Firstly, now a days, there is increased in the usage of the...
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Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...acks cannot be ignored. Firstly, now a days, there is increased in the usage of the...
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Line 3, column 57, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this method' or 'these methods'?
Suggestion: this method; these methods
...ays, there is increased in the usage of these method on monthly basis because it offers for ...
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Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ers for the flexibility of spending that no need to wait to buy what they need in...
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Line 3, column 277, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...the main beneficial point of this system,which enables to roll up money in any emergen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, however, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, no doubt, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 770.0 1615.20841683 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 154.0 315.596192385 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6730225879 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.746753246753 0.561755894193 133% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 506.74238477 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3259031901 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.25 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.875 7.06120827912 225% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126214019049 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0397835691064 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466185399943 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0630605567678 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372549348188 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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