Online advertising has been bringing massive profits for its providers.
What should be the main problem that comes with online advertising?
What would be done to address such a problem?
In recent years, OA is an integral revenue for its providers. Beside several advantages, this phenomenon leads to undesirable prolems. This essay demonstrates the problem and elicits a measure to tackle
The digital advertising have existed many problems. The noticeable issue is fraud. Providers have cheated with figures in order to increase their profit. Although display ads may not be seen by a human, automated algorithems still accounts these clickthrough. As the statistic, a Google found 56% of ads isn't accessed by users
This problem can be lessened by some measures. Firstly, ads industry have to set up a commission which will draft new regulations. With serious controllable and strict laws, providers may significantly limit cheating behaviors. Secondly, to tackle this problem, users should download ad fraud prevention tool. The app can distinguish genuine ad engagements from fraud. Users' platforms will not appear irrelevant contents.
In conclusion, fraud is the negative problem of online advertising. So regulations and prevention tool should be taken sooner to prevent this issue from deterioting futher.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 305, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...he statistic, a Google found 56% of ads isnt accessed by users This problem can b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 968.0 1615.20841683 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 171.0 315.596192385 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66081871345 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02589623331 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.707602339181 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 506.74238477 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.3382223174 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.1428571429 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.2142857143 20.7667163134 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18455041647 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556291344077 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490270383458 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105893569861 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271730740383 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.66 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.51 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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