The graph shows the income of four cafes in New York over last year.
The table illustrates the revenue of four cafes in New York throughout last year.
Overall, it is apparent there were three upwards patterns and one downwards. This sharp fall showed by Tea Room Cafe, it started the year with the most high among cafes income of $160 000 but to the end of the year it hit the bottom with approximately $50 000.
Going into details, income of Internet Express, Wi-Fi Cafe and Cafe Cool rose over the year, with wild fluctuations only for the second and the third cafes, whilst Internet Express showed slight decrease from January to July, then gradual increase with finishing the year at approximately $135 000 mark. Wi-Fi Cafe and Cafe Cool early on had $50 000 and nearly $30 000 respectively then showed erratic rise mixed with significant decrease, and from September both cafes income rocketed (started to rocket).
By contrast, Tea Room Cafe only had decreasing income to the end of the year (only Tea Room Cafe had a decrease in income). The sharp falling started in October. This Cafe lost almost $100 000 during two months.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 459, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cafes'' or 'cafe's'?
Suggestion: cafes'; cafe's
...icant decrease, and from September both cafes income rocketed started to rocket. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 874.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40664545458 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586956521739 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.3604617104 43.030603864 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.25 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348899319963 0.215688989381 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146696021776 0.103423049105 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131292691464 0.0843802449381 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241417609162 0.15604864568 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113467646486 0.0819641961636 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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