ly skilled professionals like doctors, engineers and IT professionals from poorer countries are migrating to developed countries for better-paying jobs.
What are the possible problems of this and what solutions can you suggest to deal with this issue?
In the last decade, an enormous amount of highly qualified workers such as doctors, engineers and tech professionals from under-developed territories have moved to rich nations due to their attractive salary offers. This essay shall delineate the pernicious effects of such a situation and possible solutions to resolve it.
To begin with, migration of such skilled labours would dramatically affect the population of the country. Juveniles are considered as the individuals who would portray the future of the nation that would plummet as a result of the immigration to developed nations. Moreover, such a movement of citizens would inflict scarcity of educated people in the territory. Consequently, the country's export business would become extinct and its literacy ratio would drastically dwindle. For instance, ten percent population of developing nations immigrate to the developed countries every year that has detrimental affects on the poorer countries.
Several measurements could benefit governments to retain such talents in their respective countries such as high pay scale and various amenities. Higher salaries could attract them to dwell in the country as the fundamental reason to migrate is the alluring salary structures of the rich territories. Moreover, providing medical facilities, such as surgeries at a reasonable cost and free medical check-ups, would foster them not to leave their homecountry. To illustrate, better pay-offs and several benefits to the citizens would help them to live an affluent lifestyle, which would encourage them to live and aid their motherland.
In conclusion, migration of highly skilled professionals could impose diverse repercussions for the nation. Therefore, governments should implement crucial steps to motivate individuals to live in their own country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75555555556 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06924207478 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607407407407 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0667635489 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.538461538 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164651202181 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059591132777 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474901396495 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990116409866 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025060217177 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.77 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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