The bar chart shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
The bar graph represents the generation and utilization of electricity in top ten countries during 2014. The value of electricity is in billion kWh.
To begin with, it is clear from the bar graph that the value of generation and consumption of electricity was more in China, that is about 5,398 and 5,322 followed by United States whose values were little lower than above (4,099 and 3,866) . Moving further, in Russia, electricity had almost same value of production and utilization as 1,057 and 1,038 respectively. Moreover, Japan had generated electricity little higher (936.2) than India (871) and their consumption values had difference of 200 points.
In addition, Canada and France generated and used almost similar amount of energy as (618.9 and 499.9) and (561.2 and 462.9) . And Brazil generated energy little higher (530.7) than Germany (526.6) while in utilization Germany had more value (582.5) than Brazil (455.8) . Lastly, Korea Republic had generated and used almost equal amount of power as about 485.1 and 449.5 respectively.
overall, he value of production and consumption of power was maximum in China and United States rather than other eight countries out of ten, during 2014.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, lastly, moreover, while, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 6.8 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 991.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18848167539 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6436465426 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539267015707 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2701575454 43.030603864 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.875 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205470535822 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107305105407 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122004865674 0.0843802449381 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172186107509 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127794635107 0.0819641961636 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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