You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
In some countries children have very strict rules of behaviour, while in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they want.
To what extent should children have to follow rules?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 254 words.
The freedom of youngsters is most debatable topic in these days. There are very strict rules in some countries for children whereas others oppose this trend and allow them to do everything according to their choice. However, I personally share the opinion with first part of statement and in my accordance, these rules are must.
To begin with the importance of strictness in a child's life, it is necessary to understand that government creates regulations to secure the society from dangerous activities. For instances, authorities do not give permission to kids join any life risking activity such as swimming on beach if they are not followed by their guardian. Moreover, in this technology era, administrations implement some restrictions on age basis to prevent them from watching any videos which contains violence or encourage them towards drugs. Also, there are laws for young ones at every place for their own safety. For example, there is a legal age required to get liquor as well as to enter in clubs.
On the flipside, some tend to think that youngsters should do anything they want. They assume that it depends on persons own decision which is right or wrong for him, so they should not fall under any kind of commands which do not allow them to choose their activities. Furthermore, this percentage of population believe that lack of freedom would give rise to problems because children could not get experience without doing anything.
To be concluded, it is true that self-rule gives more convenience to everybody, but, some of the directives are actually beneficial for the upcoming generation as I discussed above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 86, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ves more convenience to everybody, but, some of the directives are actually beneficial for ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, as to, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, as well as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06296296296 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78125461421 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625925925926 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3131700731 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.916666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.3333333333 7.06120827912 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213076904674 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749059202304 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844883213303 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123997599271 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0802420905974 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.