Do you agree that the advantages cars bring out weigh the disadvantages
With the increase of cars on the road, I strongly believe that they bring several demerits to both the environment and to the health people.
To begin with, cars causes a lot of road traffic congestion making the environment unconducive. As both private and public cars ply the same road due to the fact that everybody leaves and returns almost the same time. This makes the road to be busy. More so, it also causes the road to be in a dehabilitated state resulting from pot holes thus hinders the free movement of vehicles. For instance, individual always want to drive their own car because they can determine their schedule and movement. However, this can be prevented if they use other means of transport thus reduce the total number of cars on the road.
Further more, cars also have adverse effects on the health of the people. As a result of many cars on the road, it exhaust or fumes from its combustion causes air pollution. This can affect the upper respiratory system and predisposes people to asthma since they can not inhale clean air. In addition, it makes people to visit the hospital frequently as dust inhale can also give catarrh and cough. They money they ought to use to take care of other things will be spent on medications. For example, the statistics gotten from health journal published in Nursing world shows that, there are now increase rates of upper respiratory tract infections resulting from air pollution. All this could be curb if the numbers of cars are reduced thus people can live a healthy life.
In conclusion, I totally opion that cars on the road have several negative effects on people's life as they causes many respiratory diseases and not only that, it also makes the environment unconducive because of the heavy traffic caused by having many cars on the road at the same period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 116, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'exhausts'?
Suggestion: exhausts
...s a result of many cars on the road, it exhaust or fumes from its combustion causes air...
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Line 5, column 425, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...rrh and cough. They money they ought to use to take care of other things will be sp...
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Line 5, column 596, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'increased'.
Suggestion: increased
...Nursing world shows that, there are now increase rates of upper respiratory tract infect...
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Line 7, column 108, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'cause'
Suggestion: cause
...egative effects on peoples life as they causes many respiratory diseases and not only ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76100628931 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46334626856 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528301886792 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8684963901 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.933333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0797756609382 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0328741801898 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0297852013587 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0641469803654 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213781192802 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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