Nowadays celebrities earn more money than politicians. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development?
These days, celebrities make more handsome income compared to politicians. This essay will discuss why this is happening and provide evidence as to why political leaders earn less money than celebrities’ figures. In my view, this is a negative development which can bring corruption and an unbalanced society.
There are certain persuasive arguments of why political leaders make less money compared to celebrities. The prime reason is that politicians came into power by taking an oath that they won’t get involved in business to earn extra income, and they are limited to their monthly salary from the government. Whereas, celebrities’ figures do not have bounding to sign only one contract at a time; therefore, it is widely believed that they could earn much more income than politicians. A final reason is that politicians are accountable to the general public, and if they got assets beyond means then it would be difficult for them to justify the source of income. Hence, many governments have decided to limit their perks and benefits to avoid criticism from the public.
I believe that it is a negative development because of two primary reasons. Firstly, it has been pointed out that this enormous earning gap between them could lead to the potential corruption scandal in the countries. A recent article suggests that 70% of political figures are involved in money laundering and bribery cases to cover the above-mentioned disparity. Secondly, it is sometimes said that less earning will not motivate political figures to perform their job efficiently; therefore, institutes will become weaker in the country, as a result, society will be unstable with the high number of crime rates.
In conclusion, although celebrities make a higher income than politicians because they have a wider income of sources available to them compared to political figures. However, I believe it is a negative trend that may lead to political corruption, inefficiency, and an unstable society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, whereas, as to, in conclusion, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29874213836 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91675608875 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559748427673 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4185092792 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.357142857 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270794835222 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844730465923 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524824965174 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162369109039 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721391106029 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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