What do you believe is the most important problem facing the world today? Why is it the most important? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, overall world is suffering from many problems such as climate changes. Carbon dioxide, the heat-trapping greenhouse gases which is necessary to make an earth appropriate place to live. But that has driven recent global warming. Usages of plastic bag pollute the environment. I feel this way because of two reasons , which I will explore in following essay.
First of all, human activity play an important role to increase greenhouse gases, which is leading of increase global warming. Heat in the atmosphere increased because of emission from burning coal, oil and fuel. Also, cutting down the trees causes the global warming because trees consume carbon dioxide to make food. That reduces greenhouse gases in the environment. Nowadays, everywhere usages of plastic bags are increased. Due to this environment gets polluted because decompose of plastic bags are very difficult. It effects on environment. Solution on this, Instead of plastic bag we should use cotton bags.
Secondly, climate changes is main problem. Sudden changes in climate many places gets flooded. For example, Due to heavy rain in Rishikesh (which small place in India) gets flooded, many people, animals die. Whereas, various palaces became desert which caused by the over heat waves. That places are not suitable for the humans and animal species to live. To solve the problem at this stage we should reduce usage of the fossil fuel which increases greenhouse gases. Moreover, we should grow more trees to reduce carbon dioxide from the earth.
In conclusion, climate changes are main problem but we can reduce those changes by keeping environment healthy. Reduce usage of fossil fuel and use cotton bag, grow more trees.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 324, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
.... I feel this way because of two reasons , which I will explore in following essay...
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Line 5, column 207, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...gets flooded, many people, animals die. Whereas, various palaces became desert which ca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, for example, i feel, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 273.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27838827839 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48876478007 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575091575092 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.1634553359 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.5 100.406767564 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.4090909091 20.6045352989 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0501792001931 0.236089414692 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0148105500015 0.076458572812 19% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0213519780134 0.0737576698707 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0354279427588 0.150856017488 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0103264995035 0.0645574589148 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 58.1214874552 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.46 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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