The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017

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The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

The line graph indicates the number of visitors who toured carribean island , between the year 2010 and 2017. Strikingly, more visitors preferred to stay at island compared to staying on cruise ship, whereas the number of visiting tourist saw a rapid growth between the 7 year time period.

In year 2010, almost 250000 tourist stayed on ship, which fluctuated initially till year 2013, since then it kept increasing and reached 2 million by year 2017. The visitor who opted to stay on island remained constant in first 2 years. However, it surged in next two years which means a total of 1.5 million tourist were on island in 2013. That figure remained steady for next next " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">two year followed by a little downward trend in year 2016. Although it again reached the figure of 1.5 million in year 2017.

In term of total number of visitors, 1 million tourist tourist " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">were recorded in 2010, which increased increased " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">throughtout till the year 2015, where figure reached a little more than 2.5 million. After remained steady for 1 year it surged to 3.5 million by the end of year 2017.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 76, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... of visitors who toured carribean island , between the year 2010 and 2017. Strikin...
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Line 3, column 374, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: next
...n 2013. That figure remained steady for next next ' style='color: rgb85, 85, 85...
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Line 3, column 530, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...y a little downward trend in year 2016. Although it again reached the figure of 1.5 mill...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 48, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: tourist
... of total number of visitors, 1 million tourist tourist ' style='color: rgb85, 85, 85...
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Line 5, column 183, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: increased
...;'>were recorded in 2010, which increased increased ' style='color: rgb85, 85, 85...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, then, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1142.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38679245283 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.66555139844 2.65546596893 138% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509433962264 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 91.1215441181 43.030603864 212% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 126.888888889 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5555555556 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167259477797 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0984782076907 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901446180791 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157621205657 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112304000946 0.0819641961636 137% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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