Many people nowadays tend to marry and have children in their thirties rather than at a younger age.
Is this a positive or negative development?
At the present day, it became mainstream to get married and give birth to children after reaching thirty years old in comparison with the past when the general public had a tendency to create families at an earlier age. From my perspective, it can be considered as favorable changes because in their mid-thirties people have a stable income and a built-up career that let them provide a decent upbringing for their children.
First, persons in their mid-twenties are not ready enough to take care of a child due to the fact that at this age they are at the beginning of the corporate ladder and as a rule, a job demands their full dedication. In addition, wages at the beginning of the career are relatively low and it might be significantly difficult to pay rent or mortgage and cover expenses on a child. For example, in some countries after graduation, young professionals have huge educational debts and it is not feasible for them to get into marriage and take extra responsibilities.
Second, people being financially stable in their thirties are also grown-up in terms of psychology and totally aware of their desires and needs. As a result, their marriages are more successful in comparison with early marriages in which divorce rates are significantly higher. For instance, my elder brother got married and consumed a child at the age of 21 years old and today he and his wife are struggling to save their marriage for the child’s sake.
In conclusion, having got married and offspring in the third decade of life is a positive step forward due to the reason that individuals of this age are more financially and psychologically ready to carry a burden of extra responsibilities such as having a spouse and a child.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 153, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...ld in comparison with the past when the general public had a tendency to create families at an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, third, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87162162162 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96879313048 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560810810811 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.76152166 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.222222222 106.682146367 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.8888888889 20.7667163134 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3333333333 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260741485582 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101387942189 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541232579403 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158800383647 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371583446018 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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