Some people say it is a waste of time to plan for future. It is more important to focus on present. Do you agree or disagree?
There is an opinion that future planning is fruitless activity and it is more crucial to concentrate on present-day. From my point of view, I disagree that advance planning is loss of time. It is equally important to pay attention to the present moment as well as plan for the future life.
First, it is goes without saying that everything happens in a current moment and any real change is possible right in that moment. This is the reason why every person has to put a real effort into actual deals and current performance. In addition, only being at the present moment people are able to experience total happiness, fulfillment and sense of meaning. Actually, the past and the future does not exist and a present moment is all we have.
However, planning for future activities is essential and important because forward looking plan help us to set a goal and frame our future life as well as a current moment. For instance, in my childhood, I used to write weekly schedule for each and every day of a week and I helped me significantly in my studies and sport-activities. As a result, I was able to complete the school among the best students in our class.
In conclusion, I partly agree that people has to draw significant attention towards present as it is highly influential on our life and it is literally our life. Meanwhile, perspective plans help us to keep our goals in a long run and stick to them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 157, Rule ID: ADVANCE_PLANNING[1]
Message: This phrase might be redundant. Use simply 'planning'.
Suggestion: planning
... From my point of view, I disagree that advance planning is loss of time. It is equally importan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, however, if, look, so, well, while, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1170.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64285714286 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7624748545 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5328893412 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4166666667 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263725458534 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927314999515 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728745049817 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158325741112 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0949398471358 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.