Now a days people are living longer after they retire .
What are the problems caused by this?
What measures can be taken to address such problems.
According to Government policy, people can work till they are 60 years. After 60 years need to take retirement. But these days the old people alive till 90 years. Due to this, they are facing a lot of problems in old age.
One of the major issues facing the old generation is survival. After they retire they don’t have money and need to depend on their kids. I saw in the news tells that some people throw their parents on the road, and some parents are staying in neither old-age homes nor with their kids. For example, In India, mostly the beggars are retired people. The second problem is bored, they always sit at home and not doing anything. Some old age people are getting health problems as they stay alone and nobody there to talk to them.
There are some solutions to the above problems. Firstly, when they are at a young age need to plan retirement returns. However, they will get money from these policies can live independently. Secondly, they can start a small business or help their kids by doing possible works example like buying vegetables, groceries, paying the electricity bill, or water bill, and so on. Last year when I went to Singapore almost all car drivers as above the age of 60. The summary I came to know from them is they want to earn money and don’t want to depend on their kids till they are healthy.
To sum up altogether, Old is gold. Thus, I request individual need to understand their parent's or grandparent's troubles. Help them in terms of finance or loneliness. The government can provide some policies which can give a small percentage of financial help for old age people for their survival. Also, Provide new opportunities based on their qualifications.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 73, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...people can work till they are 60 years. After 60 years need to take retirement. But t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68666666667 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47652085708 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553333333333 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2404091353 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.9523809524 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2857142857 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179309277225 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560080667212 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525961446679 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118383744502 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554005670995 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.33 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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