In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.
Why is this the case?
What can be done about this problem?
Over the past decade, many sectors have experienced a sea change in their operating procedures, with agriculture being no exception to this growing trend and directly effecting a country’s economy. . Although there are multiple methods to improve a country’s economy, hunger has been a major barrier in boosting its economy, and populace are still starving in many parts of the globe. This essay will identify the problem with utmost consideration and put forth logical solutions.
Firstly, though ancient methods of farming are being replaced by sophisticated machinery, hunger is still prevalent in many developed and developing areas. One of the main reasons is due to the rapid decline in the lineage of farmers as well as a sharp drop in new entrants to this challenging profession, regarding it to be a menial job. To cite an example many descendants of farmers are seeking better opportunities to ensure financial stabilty coupled with better living conditions. The farming vocation ceases to be a novel profession anymore and is gaining less importance compared to yesteryears. This could primarily be one of the causes for the detrimental effect on farming by and large, therefore by exercising corrective measures this could be brought into control.
On the other hand, farming has also seen exponential growth in many aspects which has rarely impacted mass production of commodities over the years. Categorically speaking, though the workforce is slowly decreasing whilst having a negative effect on the industry, the introduction of natural fertilizers and hybrid plants can contribute to a fruitful yield. This ofcourse calls for conventional wisdom and guidance from veterans in this profession. For instance, in states like Andhra Pradesh Government has allowed people to cultivate on government lands, wherein the produce is bought at a nominal price which in turn creates employment opportunities. This could serve as an initial solution to the hunger crisis which is rampant and needs careful consideration and execution.
To conclude, this essay analysed how measures can be taken to eradicate hunger by using conventional methods of farming.
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Suggestion: .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, regarding, so, still, therefore, well, for instance, as well as, by and large, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1841.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46290801187 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99362235391 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614243323442 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5145745008 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.5 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0714285714 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225411222513 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723331417556 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429604278201 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132262954306 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0189799563154 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.5 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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