nowadays men’s sports are given far more attention by the society compared to women’s sports. What are the reasons for that? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
Today’s world, sports have become an essential part of community, in which men’s sports game get high response as compare to women’s game. In this essay, I will explain some important reasons of this trend and also explain why I personally see it has both positive and negative development.
There are few significant reasons why men;s game put more influence than women’s one. First and foremost reason is that, world’s top famous games are played by men’s athlete only. For example, football and basketball. Secondly, youth generally follow sports men. In fact, they become huge fan of this particular game as well as sports men players. For instance, India has enormous youth population and are following men’s cricket team and players. Last but not the least, organizor easily gets sponsor if game relates to men’s team. Therefore, sponsored money is used to promote game and its players around the community.
On the positive side, more and more men youth involve and participate in sports game. Not only this, they get inspired by the athletes in many ways. Such as, follow health diets and exercise.
On the negative side, if gap between men’s and women’s sports become very large, it may chance to descriminate society by the society by the gender difference. To add to it, girls will not persue the sports for their professional career if they have not got good response from the people.
In conclusion, men’s and women’s sports have been perennial source of inspiring people over a long period of time. However, it should be treated as equal level. Otherwise it may have more pessimistic effect as compare to optimistic one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09124087591 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54202516697 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609489051095 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0442261541 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2222222222 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05555555556 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324320212259 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963426503222 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693753770932 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18642046653 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349945771803 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.65 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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