Some people play sport when they are young but then stop doing physical exercise when they become adults.
Why is this?
What can be done to solve this problem?
Indeed, exercise plays pivotal role to keep one healthy and happy. It is observed that few adult people become inactive to keep themselves physically fit despite of the activeness in sports during their young age. In my discourse ahead, this essay will discuss reasons including workload and preference to career development along with solutions to solve this issue.
To commence with, there are numerous causes why some people do not involve in physical activities. The first and foremost reason of it is
ever-increasing professional work pressure. This means to say that in the era of cut-throat competition, the employees have tremendous load to complete assigned tasks within tight deadlines. Therefore, working professionals are unable to spend time to do any sorts of physical exercises. Another noteworthy cause of it is that owing to mandatory co-curricular activities, school-attending children had been engaged in copious exercise, whereas during adulthood more preference is given to the career development by majority of professionals. This does not allow them to allocate time for exercise, which ultimately stops them doing any exercise.
In order to tackle this ongoing menace, stringent measures should be taken by both individuals and government. One of the most conspicuous steps for the same is that equal importance to both health and career by adults. In other words, proper time could be allocated to do exercise out of 24 hours of day. Another notable initiative is that both government and corporates should join hands to spread awareness of physical activities amongst employees. To be more precise, advertisement campaign sponsored and run by companies or government bodies would make people aware about paramount importance of physical exercise. Thus, cumulative efforts by individuals and corporates would solve the current problem.
To conclude, it is undoubtedly true that some adults avoid to do physical exercise irrespective of their activeness when they were young. As mentioned above, the prime causes behind this trend are over-preference to future development and excessive work pressure on employees, which could be managed by joint efforts of individuals and companies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid doing'.
Suggestion: avoid doing
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, therefore, thus, whereas, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1881.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54867256637 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05153936849 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616519174041 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0979984 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.647058824 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9411764706 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306170645091 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802968943668 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708026095522 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157526310807 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579194646956 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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