The chart shows the results of surveys in one African country asking teenagers the main reasons for using their phones between 2016 and 2019.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The pie chart illustrates the surveys of youth people in African country about the major purpose of using mobile phones from 2016 to 2019.
As can be seen from the graph, it is clearly evidence that over the time frame, four of sectors witnesses significant changes in their proportion of phone utilizations.
The socical networks sector accounted for the majority of using phonge in 2016 , equivalent to a half of the toal tal, however, this percentage had slightly decreased in 2017 but it prompt increased to 56% in 2019. During the same four-year period, due to the boom of social networks, the using phone calls as communication way went drop from 10% to 5%.
In 2016, purposing of using their phone for email represented an impressive 25% of the aggregate objection. However, by 2019, the figure had fallen considerably to 19%. An interesting side not is that, using their phone by African tennagers to take a photos eventually stable for two year, 2016 and 2017, which minor rose to 20% in 2019.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-08-21 | Phuong1810 | 78 | view |
| 2023-08-02 | taman150507 | 73 | view |
| 2023-04-21 | pttd.duong@gmail.com | view | |
| 2023-04-21 | pttd.duong@gmail.com | 78 | view |
| 2023-04-16 | Md Mazedul Islam | 73 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 46, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'evidenced'.
Suggestion: evidenced
...n be seen from the graph, it is clearly evidence that over the time frame, four of secto...
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Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...for the majority of using phonge in 2016 , equivalent to a half of the toal tal, h...
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Line 3, column 183, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'prompts'?
Suggestion: prompts
...e had slightly decreased in 2017 but it prompt increased to 56% in 2019. During the sa...
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Line 4, column 249, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a photo' or simply 'photos'?
Suggestion: a photo; photos
...heir phone by African tennagers to take a photos eventually stable for two year, 2016 an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 833.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84302325581 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66171006268 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662790697674 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5393976101 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216339243731 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100895839292 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631216071078 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131793834855 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688207135601 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.