Farming is the backbone of every country but nowadays many youngsters hesitate to enter in this profession. Why is this the case?
It is true that, the farming is one of the necessary professions in the world, but some people have hesitation choosing this job. In my opinion, any kind of farming is not easy occupation and it demands hard working and great patience. Therefore, most young people prefer the type of mental work rather the type of hard work.
On the one hand, farmers are the backbone of our society and they provide us with all types of food. For example, first the farmers are those who grow a crop like wheat, barley, rice. Second, they are the ones who cultivate vegetables and fruits. These foods grow according to the season and special care. Consequently, the farmers need to have rich knowledge of fruits vegetables and crops. Moreover, another sort of farmer is rancher who grow meat products. I think this is a dangerous and arduous type of profession. For instance, I raised two oxen for beef and felt the hardships of this. But at that time I got a good profit for my difficult work.
The government and people should pay more attention to the farming industry as much as possible. I think that such faculties should be opened in special colleges or universities and agronomic professors should impart their knowledge and experience so that graduates can become specialists in their profession. In addition, if youngsters have interests, ideas and skills, they may try to work in this profession without hesitation.
In conclusion, farmers are the most important people in our life. Thus, we must see all types of farming equally as a white dress worker. In this way we can attract young people to this profession.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, sort of, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1337.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82671480144 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63787528286 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58844765343 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6939292587 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.2777777778 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3888888889 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0555555556 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162390942194 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497290717164 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671563822721 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10167672918 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257566186183 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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