In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
OWN ESSAY
It is argued that owning a house is being prioritized in comparison with renting one in many nations. This essay discusses the reasons for this and why I believe this trend results in positive outcomes.
There are two main reasons to explain why owning a house is more important. First, it is seen as a more stable base for a family. While many tenants have to live at risk of becoming homeless when they face financial hardship, those living in houses that are owned have a sense of stability, comfort and security. For example, my friend who recently lost his job due to the impact of COVID-19 pandemic fall behind in his rent and is in danger of being evicted. Furthermore, owner-occupancy could be at liberty to customize their accommodation based on their demand and aesthetic taste, which is likely to lead to content and optimistic.
In my opinion, I support for those who move towards owning a house and see it as a positive development. There must be a large amount of money to be able to buy a house, and this could be difficult for poor or even middle-class families when it is often out of their budget. However, that not only a challenging but also a perfect motive for those to devote more time and energy to working and earning money. As a result, it leads to benefit both personal and economic growth. Taking myself as an example, after so many years of hard work, I finally bought a perfect house for my family that we have been expecting for a long time.
In conclusion, there is no denying the fact that living in a dream house that is owned is the desire of most people, and it seems to me that it is a positive situation as part of a natural human desire to have successes in life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49681528662 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56357360162 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563694267516 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2349757818 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.615384615 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1538461538 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215433406813 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757919264083 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689146426936 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146038672938 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0963871309464 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.