One of your friends is interested in studying abroad but confused about which course to opt for. Write a letter to your friend and in your letter:
Explain which course to choose.
Explain why this course is best.
Invite your friend to discuss in person.
Hello Smith,
I am writing this letter to assist you in choosing an appropriate course for your higher education and elucidate the reasoning for opting the particular program.
On the basis of my experience attaining a masters course in a foreign nation and several research, I believe you should reckon the Human Resource Management course, which would be for one year and equips workplace assistance at the end of duration.
When it comes to fundamental factors while considering this course, your work history and last obtained education are the indispensable contributors. Thus, this course suits best for you because you gradudated in the bachelors of human resource and have three years of recruitment experience. Therefore, studying the human resource at masters platform would aid you to acquire prestigious opportunities in the future.
Furthermore, I would be ecstatic to see you at my place to confabulate more about the program and your past accomplishments, which would certainly help in analyzing the outcomes of the mentioned course.
I look forward to meeting you soon.
Yours truly,
Chirag
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 82, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[8]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun research seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'some research'.
Suggestion: some research
... masters course in a foreign nation and several research, I believe you should reckon the Human ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, look, so, therefore, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 952.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44 4.54256449028 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02762249285 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.9527886719 44.8134815571 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 76.5299724578 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 16.8248392259 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 4.34317383033 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233145128353 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103563890443 0.0766984524023 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779823497606 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117134890117 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0899254081384 0.0580467560999 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 8.37731958763 180% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 70.7449484536 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 7.45979381443 170% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 8.71597938144 164% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 7.59969072165 127% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 8.62886597938 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.