To days many people interested with traveling to and space discovery, the government fund this journy, since this travel take alonge time and need a lot of money. the question whether government" funding to these type of exploration consider waste of money or not , in my perspective, I do not concur with the statement that funding of this travel is waste of money, in this essay I will elaborate on acouple reasons to explain my point of view.
To begin with, exploring of space is beneficail thing for our live, this is mainly due to the fact that, by doing so will enable the researcher to get a lot of information about our planet, in addition to the explore the earth" atomospher to get adequet knowelege about what will happen in the future. For instance, by NASA we can get information about ozone layer which protect our atomospher from penetration of UV radiation, since we can protect our planet from this problem by prevent pollution of our earth, because the pollution increase in ozone hole, which is harmful to humenbeing on the earth. in conclusion, the government should fund these studies and experment due to it's importance to humen heath.
Second, these trips provide us with information about other planet in the space, when the spacemen reach these place can make their experment s, furthermore, some evidences states that these plant may contain preciese metals like gold and silver which have expensive cost, therefore they can bring them to the earth and use them in investement. this is avery important reason explain to us why traviling to space is beneficial
To sum up, this statement is not as persuasive as it stands, is is mainly due to the exposition that mentioned above, how travel to the space and exploration of it is helpful to verivy our planet, moreover it is quit beneficial.
To days many people interested with traveling to and space discovery, the government fund this journy, since this travel take alonge time and need a lot of money. the question whether government" funding to these type of exploration consider waste of money or not , in my perspective, I do not concur with the statement that funding of this travel is waste of money, in this essay I will elaborate on acouple reasons to explain my point of view.
To begin with, exploring of space is beneficail thing for our live, this is mainly due to the fact that, by doing so will enable the researcher to get a lot of information about our planet, in addition to the explore the earth" atomospher to get adequet knowelege about what will happen in the future. For instance, by NASA we can get information about ozone layer which protect our atomospher from penetration of UV radiation, since we can protect our planet from this problem by prevent pollution of our earth, because the pollution increase in ozone hole, which is harmful to humenbeing on the earth. in conclusion, the government should fund these studies and experment due to it's importance to humen heath.
Second, these trips provide us with information about other planet in the space, when the spacemen reach these place can make their experment s, furthermore, some evidences states that these plant may contain preciese metals like gold and silver which have expensive cost, therefore they can bring them to the earth and use them in investement. this is avery important reason explain to us why traviling to space is beneficial
To sum up, this statement is not as persuasive as it stands, is is mainly due to the exposition that mentioned above, how travel to the space and exploration of it is helpful to verivy our planet, moreover it is quit beneficial.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.0752688172 272% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 312.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86217948718 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74046922714 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557692307692 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 20.1344086022 219% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.938875944 48.9658058833 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 216.714285714 100.406767564 216% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.5714285714 20.6045352989 216% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.7142857143 5.45110844103 307% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.424622303205 0.236089414692 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.228078989981 0.076458572812 298% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.234699110848 0.0737576698707 318% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262333116875 0.150856017488 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.27806773313 0.0645574589148 431% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.7 11.7677419355 201% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 35.28 58.1214874552 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 10.1575268817 190% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.8 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.01818996416 119% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.0537634409 195% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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