You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course.
You now find that you cannot continue the course.
Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter
describe the situation
explain why you cannot continue at this time
say what action you would like to take
Dear ma'am,
I am Sakshi, one of your students from the evening course at City Creations. I am writing this letter to inform you that I will not be able to continue the course because I am facing issue in management of time. I'm taking this opportunity to let you know that I am currently working at XTS Ltd. and due to my strict working hours it is hard to possible for me to attend the seminar on time. Nevertheless, I somehow managed to reach at the centre but I am always an hour late because of which I sometimes miss the important chapters in the class as well.
Actually, before joining the course I was between jobs, hence I have decided to enrol myself in this personality development training programme. But after 15 days a call was received by me for a job interview and I was selected for an IT company. It is really pathetic for me to leave this course that is provided by our city council, but I also don't want to lose my dream job as well. As you know that this kind of skills are very essential for everyone; however because of not having a proper schedule I will not continue my course this month.
Therefore, I want to take your grant to take a sickie for a while, so that I will complete my training and will be back to attend the classes in the next session.
It would be highly appreciated by me if you give response as soon as possible. Thereafter, I will focus on my work and plan to join the next session definitely.
Yours sincerely,
Sakshi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 213, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... am facing issue in management of time. Im taking this opportunity to let you know...
^^
Line 3, column 232, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: an; IT
... a job interview and I was selected for an IT company. It is really pathetic for me t...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'companies'?
Suggestion: companies
... interview and I was selected for an IT company. It is really pathetic for me to leave ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 346, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...rovided by our city council, but I also dont want to lose my dream job as well. As y...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, however, if, nevertheless, really, so, therefore, well, while, kind of, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 32.9175257732 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1194.0 937.175257732 127% => OK
No of words: 277.0 206.0 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31046931408 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53084298889 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548736462094 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 382.5 290.88556701 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.320902122 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8461538462 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 4.34317383033 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247331725409 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879115491857 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779964373636 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123049149864 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.083182858954 0.0580467560999 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.