Some people think climate change has a negative impact on business, while others think that it provides more business options. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.
Undoubtedly, countries around the world are trying their best to acclimatize to the volatile environment changes. (paraphrase) While some people surmise such environmental changes are not conducive or businesses, others feel that it poses alternative business opportunities. (Opinion)This essay will gingerly analyze both these perspectives and will argue why this situation is a blessing in disguise for businessmen.
People who think environmental changes will bring enormous ramifications for businesses may argue about the grimful effects of this shift on farming practices. Apparently, global warming has radically changed the rain cycle around the globe; resulting in either floods or droughts. As a consequence, farmers are losing a significant amount of their crop yield or in order words their disposable income. For instance, within the last decade, 17000 Indian farmers have committed suicide due to the economical crisis they are facing. Therefore, some people believe that climatic change has adverse effects on businesses.
Nevertheless, others including myself have an optimistic approach about this environmental shift. As most of the nations are striving hard to mitigate pollution at individual levels, entrepreneurs with their lateral thinking coming up with new avenues to make an obscene amount of money. Companies such as Carrier, Blue Star and Hitachi are making princely sums by providing air conditioning and air purifying equipment. In addition to this, a leading car manufacturer Tesla is selling electric cars and trucks and making a huge profit. These growing industries speak volumes about how creative thinkers can explore other options to make a profit even from a climatic predicament.
To conclude, even though unprecedented climate change is bringing challenges for certain businesses especially agriculture, people with sharp business acumen have proved how it is possible to achieve economic success via adapting to changing situations, and I tend to support the optimistic approach as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 115, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Paraphrase
...ze to the volatile environment changes. paraphrase While some people surmise such environm...
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Line 3, column 497, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...rmers have committed suicide due to the economical crisis they are facing. Therefore, some...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.76411960133 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02316454172 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68438538206 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2818109394 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.928571429 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213370136244 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636814764665 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698896571932 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124190124953 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029954752483 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.55 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.