In many countries recently young single people have been living far from their parents from the time they began studies or work and until they married. Do you think there are more advantages or disadvantages to this trend?
In numerous nations, youthful single individuals have been living a long way from their folks from the time they started studies or work and until they weded. This pattern is not absolutely new. From my point of view, I believe that the advantages had outweighted its cons.
As the matter of fact, living far away from their guardians has a few preferences. Firstly, one of the most important positive sides is picking up independency. Due to have opportunity, youngsters will figure out how to take duties and will get risks to accumulate insight. Furthermore, living alone without guardians youths regularly need to take choices. Maybe this would assist them with taking major significant choices of life in future. Besides, individuals can focus just on specific focus on which they have left their home and guardians.
By and by, over and over again there are downsides of this event. Regardless, absence of consistent management for which youthful age may ruin their life by picking incorrect path, for example, be dependent on medications. At last they may obliterate their appreciated future as opposed to setting up effective vocation.
What's more, due to getting occupied with their schooling or expert life, youths get almost no an ideal opportunity to speak with their folks just as different family members or companions. This circumstance winds up with decrease of the holding among them. Moreover, on the ground that guardians are more capable, they will propose suitable alternatives to their youngsters misusing their own insight. Youngsters, who live far away from family, will botch the chance to gain from their parent's information.
Taking everything into account, however living a long way from guardians has not many constructive outcomes yet disadvantages are more serious. I for one accept that youthful age ought not leave their folks as there are a greater number of bad marks than merits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2064516129 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74465898896 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625806451613 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3442818503 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6666666667 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2222222222 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311058037254 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872431779795 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0950362167737 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175851497421 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107476373421 0.056905535591 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.