Various actions need to be simultaneously taken so as to curtail cigarette consumption
All cigarette packs carry warning labels regarding their health effects, yet from my personal experience, most smokers remain indifferent. Hence, It is necessary to understand the driver behind smoking as well as providing suggestions to promote quitting tobacco.
One of the principal reasons why smokers are unable to dispose of this harmful routine is that they are addicted to a very powerful stimulant called ‘nicotine’. It seems to be a fact that almost all people can be enticed to experiment with cigarettes by their peers or take up smoking due to curiosity initially, but short-lived satisfaction can result in lifetime dependence on this habit-forming substance. For example, many studies have shown that most tobacco users have an aspiration for smoking cessation, but few managed to overcome the temptation to smoke, which necessitates extraordinary willpower not many individuals possess.
Various actions need to be simultaneously taken so as to curtail cigarette consumption. To begin with, governments can impose heavier duties on tobacco, which undoubtedly reduce a substantial number of tobacco distributors and smokers alive. At the same time, propaganda campaigns concerning the repercussions of cigarette smoke on the respiratory system targeted at prospective users, especially impressionable juveniles, should also be broadcast on television and the Internet. For example, TV program organizers could invite ex-smokers to give an elaborate account of physical suffering they must tolerate daily.
In conclusion, while there are so many justifications for tobacco use, I believe that a combination of such measures can no doubt deter many people from selecting smoking as a recreational activity.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 49, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...actions need to be simultaneously taken so as to curtail cigarette consumption. To begin...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, regarding, so, well, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74319066148 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25942324292 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.700389105058 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.1203481991 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.6 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189662123604 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104748879419 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.240350227293 0.0667982634062 360% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0983355038642 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103699149275 0.056905535591 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.31 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.71 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 49, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...actions need to be simultaneously taken so as to curtail cigarette consumption. To begin...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, regarding, so, well, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74319066148 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25942324292 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.700389105058 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.1203481991 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.6 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189662123604 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104748879419 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.240350227293 0.0667982634062 360% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0983355038642 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103699149275 0.056905535591 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.31 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.71 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.