Write about the following topic.
Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Online shopping is a new statements for busy and lazy people who wants shopping without going outside. Well, one thing always has two sides good or bad and so online shopping does the advantages and disavantages. Lets talk about the advantages, first thing of all the online shopping is incredible because you do not need to going outside to look or choose the thing you buy for. The information of the product has written on its description contains name, types of it, number relating the products and many things else. Secondlly, reviews of them are written by the reviewers who bought that product before so you can visit theirs reviews to think that "Should I buy this or not?". Finally, in my opinion that online store has a lot of things you need is more than the grocery store. Therefore, it has some disadvantages that I don't like in my list. The first thing is the delivery time is too slow, the second thing is the quality of products sometimes bad. I remembered that I have bought a black hoodie for myself. When I ordered it on a online shopping website call Shopee, I was surprised that the hoodie which I dreamed is very beautiful so I have bought that. Three days later my hoodie is arrived and I have no words to tell the beauty of it. But after for six months my hoodie has lots of dust stick onto that, i have washes it every month. In conclusion, shopping in this way has a lot of advantages but it turned out it has a lot of disadvantages, too. But I think it does not outweigh each other. The best thing you should do that care things you buy online if one day you do not need that anymore and you can donate or sell for anyone else.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, look, second, so, therefore, well, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38834951456 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45832451312 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53074433657 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9450041729 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17189185814 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568198269473 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385116825878 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17189185814 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 12.4159519038 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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