Society is based on rules and laws. If individuals were free to do whatever they want to do, it could not function. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?
These days society has been controlled by some indispensable rules. The majority are always of the opinion that individuals are not supposed to possess enough freedom as it is not practical for countries. In my view, although there is a compelling reason to support this idea, humans should be independent in making their own decisions.
Many who advocate that lows will build a bright future point out that the lows are being used in organizing society recently. For example, traffic management is becoming one of the torturing issues, especially in metropolises. As a matter of fact, by sorting out the structural rules related to this problem the traffic jam will be decreased in a significant trend. In contrast, should these rules did not exist in the communities, each individual would experience chaos in their daily routines, and also it is reported to be tough to safeguard a sustainable future for the next generation.
Nevertheless, there are some drawbacks behind the severe restriction which are advised to take into consideration. It is worth bearing in mind that the youngsters have a basic right to make a decision about their own private life, therefore, Todays the government strive hard to be involved in people’s choices. In more detail, plenty of research has been done to figure out how the policymakers have interfered in each person’s making decision process by the power of society’s rules. Consequently, with regard to this issue, it not only reduces the self-confidence of people but also indisputably leads to resentment among the adults toward themselves.
To sum up, despite the benefits which have been provided by structural laws in each community, the government is not supposed to interfere in the own human’s life by these rules. In my point of view, the laws should be used in critical society's situations to foster prosperity in the near future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
These days society has been controlled by some ind...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, for example, in contrast, as a matter of fact, in my view, to sum up, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1359223301 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98445752698 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576051779935 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5102468279 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.076923077 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7692307692 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9230769231 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0578146465458 0.244688304435 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0206361994848 0.084324248473 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0161302909735 0.0667982634062 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0364963562142 0.151304729494 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0104870196794 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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