A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old fashioned values, such as honor, kindness and trust, no longer seems important.
To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In today’s money centric world people often being judged by various factors such as property they own, power they have and other physical possessions they acquire rather than intangible good qualities they have like helping nature, trust and honor. This essay shows agreement to these points by providing certain arguments and my opinion of totally agree with real life examples.
This first argument connects with the appearance of the individuals. Although it is taught since young age not to judge someone by their wealth, society often judge someone with their house they live in, cars they drive, clothes they wear etc. while first meet. In addition to that it creates one image of that person regardless of morals and how he or she treats other people. Moreover it is more common nowadays to maintain such image among friend circle or relatives to look good despite how you attain people.
Second most important argument connects individuals mentality, most of the people think how others will judge or treat them if they do not have good car, good clothes, accessories etc. in society and to cope up with this or to maintain that image they invest in materialistic things rather than concentrating on basic values humankind ought to have. To support this argument there are many examples on social media today where celebrity turn themselves into normal attire and approach the public with torn clothes, everybody treated them as a poor until they get to know real identity of them which shows basic human tendency to treat people from their appearance at first sight.
In recapitulation, even though kindness, trust, help etc. are basic morals for any sapiens, society will judge them with the other factors and I am totally agree with this point in today’s world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
... and how he or she treats other people. Moreover it is more common nowadays to maintain ...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...with the other factors and I am totally agree with this point in today’s world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, moreover, second, so, while, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0406779661 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38067485284 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613559322034 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.0769524725 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.916666667 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5833333333 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149901356521 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557285386394 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0309313205083 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0992441372664 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186940584891 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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