The chart below shows the result of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
The chart provides information about two types of drinks which purchasing and consuming habits by Australian people in five cities of Australia: Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, Hobart. Overall, citizens of these four cities except from Adelaide went to a cafe for coffee or tea more compared to other fresh and instant coffees in last 4 weeks.
We can see from the given chart, the number of inhabitants of Sydney, Melbourne and Hobart nearly similar who went to a cafe for coffee or tea last month. Namely: percentage of residents of Sydney approximately 61%, Melbourne's 63% Hobart's 62%. Also Brisbane's 55% of population went to a cafe for drinking drinks. The smallest indicator was in Adelaide almost 45%.
Another fact is that people bought instant coffee much instead of fresh coffee. And the highest percentages in this way in Hobart 54%, Brisbane 53% and Adelaide 50%. They also bought small of fresh coffee. ( Hobart 38%, Brisbane' and Adelaide's same 34%). The residents of Sydney and Melbourne also preferred to buy instant coffee rather than fresh coffee. Consumers of instant coffee 45% and fresh coffee 44% in Sydney, 48% of instant and 42% of fresh coffees in Melbourne.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Namely,
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 993.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06632653061 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55808715076 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591836734694 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.529784368 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.75 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 5.23603664747 13% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207820218785 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682445947272 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816592780767 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158409451656 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107550918071 0.0819641961636 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.