The two bar graphs show the number of marriages and divorces in the USA and marital status of adult American in 1970 and 2000.
The two bar charts compare the quantity of American marriages and divorces and the matrimonial situation of mature American between 1970 and 2000.
Married had the highest proportion of mature Americans in both years, 1970 and 2000 while the number of people who got marriage and divorces decreased during that period of time.
In 1970, the number of marriages citizens in America started at 2.5 million and the figure for divorces citizens stood at 1 million before reaching a peak at 1.4 million in 1980. After that, there was considerably decrease of 0.5 million for marriage American and 0.4 million for divorce American until 2000.
In terms of matrimonial situation, although there was a slight fall by 10% in the percentage of married people in Americans from 1970 to 2000, it experienced far outnumbered of proportion than other statuses. At that time, the figure for unmarried and divorced increased slightly by 8% for both of them, whereas a moderate decline in the proportion of widowed Americans was seen, just by 2%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 164, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...iage and divorces decreased during that period of time. In 1970, the number of marriages citi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07602339181 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66775652296 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561403508772 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 25.732059554 43.030603864 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 144.666666667 112.824112599 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 22.9334400587 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291801535982 0.215688989381 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167711138598 0.103423049105 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0999748637132 0.0843802449381 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211185578162 0.15604864568 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0939476514613 0.0819641961636 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.2329268293 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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