Deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the world, with serious results for the environment. What do you think can be done to solve this problem?
A major problem which many countries have faced in recent years is the deforestation for other aims, like agricultural and constructing roads and building also the worst things is the logging industry. Deforestation has serious threats to the environment, such as destroying natural habitats and aquatic and terrestrial plants and animals. To preserve forests, immediate individual and government steps are needed.
In the first place educating people about the vital role of forests is a principle to save the jungles. People should be known logging industry and other human activity damaged environment and lead to climate change and this knowledge should be teach in the school. For example, children can be educated from childhood in their schools. People has to understand the impact of human activity adversely on environment or the extinction of biological diversity.
Secondly, leading people to fewer usage of wood product is another solution. For reducing the consumption of wood product, people should both be encouraged to use artificial products rather than wooden ones, and to recycle wood product such as paper. In the USA, producing goods with artificial materials rather than wood has been started since two years ago, and it is predicted that until next year, the majority of wood product will have been replaced by other substances.
As the result, trees an effective protect and defense the environment in many ways such as air pollution and soil erosion and also felling array of trees must be intercept and develop natural habitats and vegetation can be effective to solve this problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 245, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'taught'?
Suggestion: taught
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, such as, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3046875 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75061028384 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60546875 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.5640157189 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.454545455 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2727272727 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.81818181818 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215568035731 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708807097126 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619984385557 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124682536844 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620785390867 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.