Some people prefer to live in hot climates, whereas others love the lifestyle in countries with cold climates. Discuss both views and explain which climate you prefer.
As we seen that plastic waste is polluting cities, habitants and seas. which create harmful effect for the humans because of the plastic chemicals, for sea spices by swollen it, for Environment unhealthy and unhygenic. In my point of view awareness program should be conduct world without plastic use.
Firstly, anything which is made up of a plastic it’s not beneficial for the health of humans because of its toxin chemicals either it's a plastic bottle, caps, shopper bags. secondly There's some number and figure underneath of the bottles where you can see one time use only or three times can be reuse.
if you keep using that plastic for several times can create serious illness or disease like cancer, ingestion, infertility etc. In a same way life of sea mammals its dangerous for them when they swollen the micro particles of plastic it may leads ingestion, even death. In agricultural plastic bag can affect the growth of corps by hindering the process of photosynthesis not only but also effects our environmental atmosphere which will remain unclean and unhygienic.
so one reason behind this is negligence is the main cause. Usually, people throw the garbage on the landfill, abundant on the nature which is moved by wind and drained in river and went into the sea.
lastly in my point of view we have a sort out this problem in a way that try to decrease the use of plastic instead use mirror bottle, paper bag. secondly if you have plastic try to reuse for the different purpose. Thirdly recycle it and make something new out of it and lastly educate people and increase the awareness in behavioral change about it so then people use that awareness in their life to save the world from pollution.
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- Some people prefer to live in hot climates whereas others love the lifestyle in countries with cold climates Discuss both views and explain which climate you prefer 11
- More and more plastic waste has polluted cities countryside s and oceans What problems does it cause and what measures can be taken Tested on 2021 01 30 55
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86486486486 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50565467141 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591216216216 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7421575703 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.769230769 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0576260496983 0.244688304435 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0219922040121 0.084324248473 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0149117879857 0.0667982634062 22% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0350947804176 0.151304729494 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00869337015611 0.056905535591 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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