Write a letter to an english-speaking friend. In your letter
.Explain why you changed jobs.
.describe your new job
.tell him/her your other news.
Dear Sam,
Hope you have settled down well in your new job.
It has been a while since we had last met. A lot of stuff has changed over these times in my life too. things have got a little rough in the sales role after you moved out and maintaining my work-life balance had become a nightmare than ever before. Hence, I had quit my previous job in sales and I am currently working in digital marketing for a tech giant.
It has been only a year since I started here but things seem really interesting and future looks promising. there is a lot of scope for creativity and brain storming along with a friendly work culture. we work here in teams and everybody is eager to help others when necessary. I'm able to spend an hour or two with the kids also after office. I'm really enjoying this new job.
Apart from the new job there's another good news to tell you. we have moved into a new own house on bakers street and yes it's that dream home that we were always keen to buy. It's a great house with a lot of open space around the house for the kids to play around. The neighborhood too is very secure and peaceful with no honking and other nuisance issues.
Enough of me and myself, tell me more about your career and your new little changes in life. I'm eager to hear back from you.
Give my best wishes to Beth and kids.
Take care.
Regards,
Anthony
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 104, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Things
...hanged over these times in my life too. things have got a little rough in the sales ro...
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Suggestion: There
...interesting and future looks promising. there is a lot of scope for creativity and br...
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Suggestion: We
...ing along with a friendly work culture. we work here in teams and everybody is eag...
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Line 5, column 279, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...is eager to help others when necessary. Im able to spend an hour or two with the k...
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Suggestion: I'm
...or two with the kids also after office. Im really enjoying this new job. Apart ...
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Suggestion: there's
...this new job. Apart from the new job theres another good news to tell you. we have ...
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Suggestion: We
...b theres another good news to tell you. we have moved into a new own house on bake...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... new own house on bakers street and yes its that dream home that we were always kee...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...m home that we were always keen to buy. Its a great house with a lot of open space ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...er and your new little changes in life. Im eager to hear back from you. Give my...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, really, so, well, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1111.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 259.0 206.0 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.28957528958 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.06195681246 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 127.690721649 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633204633205 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3764871755 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.3529411765 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2352941176 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.70588235294 4.34317383033 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203492643438 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556387751169 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077459098673 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116102085408 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0944122521236 0.0580467560999 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.01 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.