Nowadays, fewer people tend to look after their old relatives and send them to some old age homes. What is the situation in your country? In your opinion,
who should be responsible to look after the elderly?
It is considered to be true that less number of individuals are taking care of their parents these days and for their care, they are sending them to convalescent homes. I believe that, it is the shared responsibility of both children and the government to take care of people in an old age.
The trend of sending aged person to retirement homes is now can be seen everywhere around the globe, but here I would like to shed some light on the situation of this trend in my country India. India has the second highest population in the world, and here maximum number of people are working in long shifts and under less wage. Due to less wage, it is difficult for them to run their families, and also they do not have enough time to take care of their parents, so they decide to shift their guardians to the nursing home.
In my perspective, children, as well as the government, both are responsible for taking care of people in an old age, but the first and foremost responsible are the children. While children spent the maximum time of their life with their parents, and parents do everything to make their child a successful person, it is the first responsibility of children to give love, respect and care to their parents when they get old. On the other hand, the authorities must make laws in favor of parents so that they do not get abandoned in old age by their children. In addition, the government must spend some amount from their funds to support aged people so that they can survive and live their life happily.
To conclude, it is the shared responsibility of people and the government to look after people in the age when they need the utmost care and respect.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, second, so, well, while, in addition, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55115511551 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52623826512 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478547854785 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.3455636908 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.9 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239741334114 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107541481497 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436656282225 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161013867824 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257862004361 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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