The charts below give information on the ages of populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
These four pie charts below illustrate the population of different group of ages in Yemen and Italy in 2000 and 2050.
In Yemen, in 2000 half of population proportion was accounting for 0-14 years which is forecasted to be 37% in 2050. The second common population was 15-59 years by contributing for 46% that is predicted to be 57% in 2050. Finally, 60+ years which accounted for 4% might be 6% in future.
On the other hand, in Italy the largest number of ages in 2000 was 15-59 by 60% is projected to be fell down to 46% in 2050. 60+ as the second common proportion of population by 24% is forecasted to be 42%. 0-14 years by 14% contribution in 2000 is going to be about 12% in 2050.
Overall, by a glance it clear that the proportion of 0-14 years would be decreased in both counties. In Yemen, 2 other age groups might be increased but in Italy 60+ years would be rose up as contrast of 15-59 years.
in Italy the largest number of ages in 2000 was 15-59 by 60% is projected to be fell down
in Italy the largest number of ages in 2000 which was 15-59 by 60% is projected to be fell down
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