You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter:
give details of what went wrong
explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time
say what action you would like the manager to take
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the services which I received at your hotel. I checked in last Monday in room 206. It was freezing outside but the heating system did not work. It was absolutely cold in the room and I had to ask a coverlid to get warm at night.
Next day I had a discussion with senior manager Mr. Smith to solve the problem, but he did not seem interested in cooperating on the issue. He said that the heating season was over last month and the hotel does not have a separate heating system.
I would like to remain your loyal customer if you could solve this problem with heating. I am sorry if this sounds like a rant but I hope this place will become more client oriented and personal will be more friendly.
Thank you in advance for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Green Rose.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 693.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56250089988 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649350649351 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 207.9 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5574889728 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.3 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.1 4.34317383033 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187863461076 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714759034674 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616083167662 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108811277673 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516414917093 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.