The best way to help developing countries is to give them financial aid.
write an essay agreeing or disagreeing with this statement. suggest alternatives to this policy
It is evident that financial aid is the prompting for the developing countries to elevate their economy. Likewise, economic aid helps them to advance their infrastructure. Although financial aid leads to more establishment opportunities, it follows with several disadvantages for civil society. In my opinion, alternative policy could act as a better option for developing nations to retrieve their economy.
One of the reasons of economy growth in developing countries is financial supporting from investors or World Bank. The funds will be used to build infrastructure and fix different sectors, such as education and health. The infrastructure sector seems to be the most essential as it generally affects other sectors and could generate massive income for the countries. For instance, Indonesian government should be more concerned regarding the infrastructure in Bali as it is one of the major global tourist destinations and the biggest foreign monetary exchanges for Indonesia. As a result, developing countries become more established in wealth development independency for welfare state. For this reason, the developing countries requires supporting financial from wealthier countries to boost their performance in local sectors.
However, in other parts, local authority might corrupt financial support for individual importances. For example, the annual growth of malnutrition for both adults and children in developing countries worldwide does not seem to be showing any hint of decline but it’s been surging instead. The main intention of financial aid is to distribute capital to help malnourished individuals in the outskirts, which has failed due to corruption. Therefore, the aid does not go concurrently with the initial motivation.
Furthermore, the aid could also be a beneficial recourse for the education sector. As an illustration, the fund could be used to provide scholarship program opportunities for children and young adults with poor conditions. These programs will allow them to obtain much better quality of education and experience, with which they could use to contribute back for their country as they finish school. A nation with excellent human capital would eventually leads to advanced economy turnover. Concisely, as I suppose that financial aid might contribute to the possibility of fund mismanagement such as corruption, I’d rather prefer to go with an alternative policy such as educational improvement as an aid for the developing countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 455, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...xcellent human capital would eventually leads to advanced economy turnover. Concisely...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, likewise, regarding, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i suppose, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2127.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.672 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21120925648 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546666666667 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 659.7 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.194638199 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.947368421 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7368421053 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.68421052632 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222907324599 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782865523486 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573357594159 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147977191535 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362994615161 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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