The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
The chart below illustrates Australian people drinking and buying custom which coffee and tea in last 4 weeks. This datas is for Australian five cities ( Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, Hobart).
Overall, drinking coffee or tea go to the cafe or restaurant is higher percentage than buying them. Melbourne led this figure(approximately 63 percent). Buying the coffee or tea is low percent than going to the restaurant to drink coffee and tea. Buying instant coffee in Hobart was higher percentage. It was nearly 54 percent. The lowest percentage was in Sydney, at around 45 percent which to buy rapidly coffee in last 4 weeks. Buying fresh coffee in last 4 weeks was low percentage between Australian people. Buying fresh coffee the lowest percentage was in Brisbane and Adelaide, at around 34 percent.
In conclude, Australian people preferred going to the cafe drinking coffee and tea in last 4 weeks than buying fresh or instant coffee. This chart below shows this informations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 826.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1625 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82950415267 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 72.0 106.607317073 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.45 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 231.3 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6661005383 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.8333333333 112.824112599 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3333333333 22.9334400587 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.0 5.23603664747 0% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359132355233 0.215688989381 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148860768536 0.103423049105 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109980054654 0.0843802449381 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.305428201241 0.15604864568 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797344346922 0.0819641961636 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.2329268293 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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