The chart below shows the percentage of industry sectors contribution to the economy of India and Turkey in 2000
The two pie charts depict how industries contributed their eight sector to the Indian economy and Turkish economy in 2000.
Overall,from the graph,it is clear that agriculture had the highest proportion in India and least proportion by construction. However, health care, which was most preferable sector in turkey but least percentage in finance business in 2000 by turkey.
Firstly,India,where was the highest proportion of 24% by agriculture sector,where half of it percentage had the government sector. The manufacturer sector covered 8% whereas construction had 3% in India. However, leisure and hospitality and healthcare and education sector share equal percentage of contribution of 17% respectively, which was three more than trade, utilities and transportation sector.5%,which was covered by finance and business.
Secondly,the agriculture and leisure and hospitality contributed similar percentage of share,which was 14% respectively. The least amount of contribution seen 9n finance business at 6% in 2000.whlie trade and utilities and healthcare and education were around equal share, which were 16% and 17% respectively.one in ten of share covered by construction and 1% less had by government. Although, manufacturer was share just above one ten in turkey.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 3.97073170732 403% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1088.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.81818181818 4.92477711251 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.55058468505 2.65546596893 134% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.7652932509 43.030603864 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.888888889 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7777777778 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307689492556 0.215688989381 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137737182632 0.103423049105 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0948189973818 0.0843802449381 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210816353292 0.15604864568 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0912833977392 0.0819641961636 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.2329268293 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 61.2550243902 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.3012195122 131% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.48 11.4140731707 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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