T ouri sm i s alway s a force for good which enables people of di fferent count ries to
understand each other . T o wh at e xte n t d o you agr e e wi th th i s i d e a?
Th e role of t ou ri sm in t h e world t oday i s widely debat ed, wi t h som e people claim in g t h at i t i s
in deed a f orce f or in t ern at ion al u n derst an din g . However , I person al ly do n ot en t i rely accept t h i s, an d I
wi l l ex plain wh y in t h i s essay .
Fi rst ly , we m u st con sider t h e pot en t ial n eg at ives of con t act between cu l t u res. For ex am ple,
wh en west ern t ou ri st s vi si t u n t ou ch ed part s of t h e world, t h ei r st ay cau ses pol lu t ion f or local
societ ies. W e see t h i s in t h e l i t t er lef t at Mach u Picch u in Peru , an d in t h e dam ag e t o ecolog y cau sed
by saf ari t ou ri sm in Af rica. Fu rt h erm ore, t h ere are n u m erou s ex am ples of t en sion between t ou ri st s an d
local cu l t u res, ran g in g f rom dru n k en Bri t i sh t ou ri st s in Eu rope t o Am erican ‘sprin g break ers’ in
Can adian or L at in Am erican resort s. I n t h ese cases, t ou ri sm act u al ly leads t o resen tm en t an d di st ru st
between n at ion al i t ies, n ot bet t er u n derst an din g .
A f u rt h er reason t o be wary of t h i s idea i s t h e econ om ic aspect . I t i s som et im es said t h at
t ou ri sm im proves in t ern at ion al relat ion s becau se i t en cou rag es t h e f low of m on ey f rom weal t h y t o
less developed cou n t ries. I n real i t y , h owever , t h e weal t h g en erat ed u su al ly st ay s in t h e h an ds of
privat e com pan ies or local of f icial s, an d rarely drips down in t o t h e popu lat ion . Man y of u s h ave
vi si t ed less developed n at ion s as t ou ri st s, an d h ave wi t n essed at f i rst h an d t h e povert y t h at ex i st s
ou t side t h e con f in es of t h e resort h ot el s. W e leave wi t h t h e im pression t h at ou r st ay h as con t ribu t ed
n ot h in g t o t h e l ives of t h ose we h ave observed.
Th i s i s n ot t o say t h at t ou ri sm i s en t i rely bad, of cou rse. Th ere are ben ef i t s in t erm s of
im provin g local in f rast ru ct u re su ch as roads an d ai rport s. Bu t t o say t h at i t i s ‘alway s a f orce f or
g ood’ i s t o ig n ore t h e variou s problem s i t cau ses.
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- Topic The graph below shows the number of inquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six month period in 2011 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- T ouri sm i s alway s a force for good which enables people of di fferent count ries to understand each other T o wh at e xte n t d o you agr e e wi th th i s i d e a 67
- The pie charts below give data on the spending and consumption of resouce by countries of the world and how the population is distributed 78
- Topic The graph below shows the number of inquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six month period in 2011 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
- Do good exam results at school or college guarantee success in life Discuss Do you believe that studying hard will bring a better life 61
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...cou n t ries. I n real i t y , h owever , t h e weal t h g en erat ed u su al ly...
^^
Line 15, column 73, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... real i t y , h owever , t h e weal t h g en erat ed u su al ly st ay s in t h...
^^
Line 15, column 98, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... t h e weal t h g en erat ed u su al ly st ay s in t h e h an ds of privat e c...
^^
Line 15, column 110, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t h g en erat ed u su al ly st ay s in t h e h an ds of privat e com pan ies o...
^^
Line 15, column 120, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...erat ed u su al ly st ay s in t h e h an ds of privat e com pan ies or local o...
^^
Line 16, column 30, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... an ds of privat e com pan ies or local of f icial s, an d rarely drips down i...
^^
Line 16, column 46, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...t e com pan ies or local of f icial s, an d rarely drips down in t o t h e popu...
^^
Line 16, column 57, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... ies or local of f icial s, an d rarely drips down in t o t h e popu lat ion . ...
^^
Line 16, column 69, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l of f icial s, an d rarely drips down in t o t h e popu lat ion . Man y of u...
^^
Line 16, column 96, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...y drips down in t o t h e popu lat ion . Man y of u s h ave vi si t ed less d...
^^
Line 16, column 104, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... down in t o t h e popu lat ion . Man y of u s h ave vi si t ed less developed...
^^
Line 16, column 108, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n in t o t h e popu lat ion . Man y of u s h ave vi si t ed less developed n a...
^^
Line 17, column 55, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...s developed n at ion s as t ou ri st s, an d h ave wi t n essed at f i rst h an ...
^^
Line 17, column 81, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t ou ri st s, an d h ave wi t n essed at f i rst h an d t h e povert y t h at ...
^^
Line 17, column 90, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t s, an d h ave wi t n essed at f i rst h an d t h e povert y t h at ex i st s...
^^
Line 17, column 94, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... an d h ave wi t n essed at f i rst h an d t h e povert y t h at ex i st s ou...
^^
Line 17, column 113, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...essed at f i rst h an d t h e povert y t h at ex i st s ou t side t h e con f...
^^
Line 17, column 121, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... f i rst h an d t h e povert y t h at ex i st s ou t side t h e con f in es o...
^^
Line 18, column 31, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...x i st s ou t side t h e con f in es of t h e resort h ot el s. W e leave wi t ...
^^
Line 18, column 45, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... side t h e con f in es of t h e resort h ot el s. W e leave wi t h t h e im pr...
^^
Line 18, column 71, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 't h'.
Suggestion: t h
... t h e resort h ot el s. W e leave wi t h t h e im pression t h at ou r st ay h as...
^^^^^^^^
Line 18, column 74, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... h e resort h ot el s. W e leave wi t h t h e im pression t h at ou r st ay h...
^^
Line 18, column 93, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l s. W e leave wi t h t h e im pression t h at ou r st ay h as con t ribu t ed...
^^
Line 18, column 101, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... leave wi t h t h e im pression t h at ou r st ay h as con t ribu t ed n ot h...
^^
Line 18, column 113, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h t h e im pression t h at ou r st ay h as con t ribu t ed n ot h in g t o t...
^^
Line 19, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...st ay h as con t ribu t ed n ot h in g t o t h e l ives of t h ose we h ave ob...
^^
Line 19, column 33, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...u t ed n ot h in g t o t h e l ives of t h ose we h ave observed. Th i s i s...
^^
Line 21, column 4, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'i s'.
Suggestion: i s
...es of t h ose we h ave observed. Th i s i s n ot t o say t h at t ou ri sm i s ...
^^^^^^^
Line 21, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...se we h ave observed. Th i s i s n ot t o say t h at t ou ri sm i s en t i ...
^^
Line 21, column 25, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve observed. Th i s i s n ot t o say t h at t ou ri sm i s en t i rely bad...
^^
Line 21, column 33, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ved. Th i s i s n ot t o say t h at t ou ri sm i s en t i rely bad, of co...
^^
Line 21, column 45, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... s i s n ot t o say t h at t ou ri sm i s en t i rely bad, of cou rse. Th er...
^^
Line 21, column 56, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... t o say t h at t ou ri sm i s en t i rely bad, of cou rse. Th ere are ben ...
^
Line 21, column 62, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...say t h at t ou ri sm i s en t i rely bad, of cou rse. Th ere are ben ef i t ...
^^
Line 21, column 71, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at t ou ri sm i s en t i rely bad, of cou rse. Th ere are ben ef i t s in t e...
^^
Line 21, column 108, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of cou rse. Th ere are ben ef i t s in t erm s of im provin g local in f ras...
^^
Line 22, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ben ef i t s in t erm s of im provin g local in f rast ru ct u re su ch as ro...
^^
Line 22, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...i t s in t erm s of im provin g local in f rast ru ct u re su ch as roads an ...
^^
Line 22, column 47, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...vin g local in f rast ru ct u re su ch as roads an d ai rport s. Bu t t o say ...
^^
Line 22, column 58, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...l in f rast ru ct u re su ch as roads an d ai rport s. Bu t t o say t h at i ...
^^
Line 22, column 78, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: t
... re su ch as roads an d ai rport s. Bu t t o say t h at i t i s ‘alway s a f or...
^^^^
Line 22, column 79, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re su ch as roads an d ai rport s. Bu t t o say t h at i t i s ‘alway s a f o...
^^
Line 22, column 88, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... as roads an d ai rport s. Bu t t o say t h at i t i s ‘alway s a f orce f or ...
^^
Line 22, column 96, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s an d ai rport s. Bu t t o say t h at i t i s ‘alway s a f orce f or g ood’ ...
^^
Line 22, column 101, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d ai rport s. Bu t t o say t h at i t i s ‘alway s a f orce f or g ood’ i s ...
^^
Line 22, column 116, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...u t t o say t h at i t i s ‘alway s a f orce f or g ood’ i s t o ig n ore t...
^
Line 23, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... i t i s ‘alway s a f orce f or g ood’ i s t o ig n ore t h e variou s problem ...
^^
Line 23, column 54, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... o ig n ore t h e variou s problem s i t cau ses.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 691.0 315.596192385 219% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 2.19247467438 5.12529762239 43% => More chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 5.12707312764 4.20363070211 122% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.48035556602 2.80592935109 53% => Word_Length_SD is low.
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.308248914616 0.561755894193 55% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 0.7 1.60771543086 44% => Avg_syllables_per_word is low.
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 46.0 20.2975951904 227% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.1946177727 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 46.0666666667 20.7667163134 222% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.733333333333 7.06120827912 10% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.38176352705 456% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 143.0 5.01903807615 2849% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113145919352 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527717394704 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418192193965 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0452871836845 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496750718081 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 100.93 50.2224549098 201% => Flesch_reading_ease is high.
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.6 11.3001002004 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: -3.69 12.4159519038 -30% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.1190380762 202% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.