Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some believe this travel has a negative impact on the countries travelled to. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the contemporary era, plethora of the countries are witnessing improvement in standard of living and myriads of people are travelling to abroad for pleasure. Some people opine that travel has negatively impacted the countries in which people travelled. I partially disagree with the statement that foreign tourists negatively impacting the countries and in the following paragraph I would discuss my viewpoint with supportive examples.
Tourism is one of the great attractions of any country which also adds revenue to the government’s bucket, generating employment for local as well as big vendors. Now a days, people prefer foreign country travel instead of local tour as they are now more curious to learn about diverse culture by crossing geographical boundaries, explore places which have mesmerizing characteristics and to experience celebrations, festivals and occasions of other countries. Foreign tourists also came with great disposable income to consume foreign dishes, to buy clothes, gifts and other materials to create memories for later time. Which is beneficial for the country in which they intend to travel or travelled. Moreover, countries also attract overseas tourists by improving infrastructure development and providing them world class experience in every aspect.
Contrary to above, sometime tourists from other countries disgrace the beautiful sculptures, paintings and public places which is unacceptable for any country. Also, littering and damaging of the public properties and disrespecting the culture and custom of that country are also some of the reasons which too impact negatively.
In conclusion, there are numerous benefits of international travelling by people which outweigh the negative impact. If people respect the country’s rules and regulation in which they are anticipate visiting then it will be winning situation for both.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, then, well, as to, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1604.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72857142857 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03715092056 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582142857143 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.011750809 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.666666667 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333510448994 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146140169531 0.084324248473 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0953588670751 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226055692211 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100178787626 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.25 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.36 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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