Computers are now the basis of the modern world. They should therefore be introduced into classrooms, and their programs used for direct teaching purposes. However, dependence on computers in teaching may carry a certain degree of risk to students.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Nowadays, Computers are taken many businesses and also used in almost every field. it held most work from entire world. Some people think that computers should introduced in the classrooms and the programs related to teching should be used in classroom. However, other suggest that particular degrees of students are in a risk due to the dependance on computers. I totally agree with the later statement and i will provide related reason in further pareagraph after urge both argument.
First of all, plenty of business and work was handaled by the computers and it is the necessary one to learn every people because of the modernizaton. Moreover, computers are made our work easy and provide speedy output, eventhough if it is complex problem which humans are unable to solve it. as a result, it is very helpful for student in diffrent ways and it is beneficial to introduced computers in the classroom. In addition, Teachers also use this technology to clear student concept easily. For instance, teacher taught student about how motor engine work theoritically but if student visualize throgh some animation it clears all methodolgy in deep.
In other hand, more dependancy on computer has significant drawbacks. Such as many skills are at risk of extict like face to face communication, hand writing, mentally stability. which are make us human.
To conclude, However, the computers have number of benefits , the negative effect and important skills not to be ignored. i think normal use of computer is perfectly fine but we do not have to totally depend on the computers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...es and also used in almost every field. it held most work from entire world. Some ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ally agree with the later statement and i will provide related reason in further ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...tion, hand writing, mentally stability. which are make us human. To conclude, Howe...
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Line 5, column 180, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tion, hand writing, mentally stability. which are make us human. To conclude, Howe...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...r, the computers have number of benefits , the negative effect and important skill...
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Suggestion: I
...and important skills not to be ignored. i think normal use of computer is perfect...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...and important skills not to be ignored. i think normal use of computer is perfect...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, i think, in addition, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09615384615 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76939678984 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1146807528 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3333333333 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259964981908 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823438106823 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698265136047 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144738824416 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060926857519 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...es and also used in almost every field. it held most work from entire world. Some ...
^^
Line 1, column 409, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ally agree with the later statement and i will provide related reason in further ...
^
Line 5, column 180, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...tion, hand writing, mentally stability. which are make us human. To conclude, Howe...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 180, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tion, hand writing, mentally stability. which are make us human. To conclude, Howe...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 60, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...r, the computers have number of benefits , the negative effect and important skill...
^^
Line 7, column 123, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...and important skills not to be ignored. i think normal use of computer is perfect...
^
Line 7, column 123, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...and important skills not to be ignored. i think normal use of computer is perfect...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, i think, in addition, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09615384615 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76939678984 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1146807528 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3333333333 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259964981908 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823438106823 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698265136047 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144738824416 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060926857519 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.