Adult youth are often call up for working for the development of communities some people say they should work volunteer where as other say that they should get paid discuss both the views and give your opinion
In this present era, the young generation went for working, and they helped to upgrade society's lifestyle. While, few parents believe that children should work as a volunteer, the rest of the parents are not support that statement. They feel students should get paid for their work efforts. This essay will explain both the aspects and also gives my opinion in the following paragraphs.
To embarks with, plenty of things, which indicated that voluntary work is reasonable for students as well as society. To begin with, the children who do unpaid work, they are more sensitive to their culture. So they will do work, which helps to develop their country. For example, Indian adults connect to charity or foundation, which do work for improving society lifestyle. So, they learn to develop the country. Therefore, people think unpaid work is available for teenager and the nation too.
On the other hand, Paid work has its own benefits. Firstly, if students do paid-work than, they do not require to ask their parents for money. They become independent at an early age. Secondly, adults can utilize money in their favorite areas without asking anyone. So, they can develop their investment skills which will be a great one for them. For instance, students in the USA want for a job at an early age. They are smarter than other countries children.
To conclude, although, voluntary work is good for adult, paid work is more valuable. That makes them independent and also develop their financial skill in that age. In my opinion, I strongly feel that pay work is more valuable rather than unpaid.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 112, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'asking'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: asking
... do paid-work than, they do not require to ask their parents for money. They become in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96282527881 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42217201331 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561338289963 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.1047713119 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.75 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.45 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362076333215 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121882847252 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067894331112 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235682077848 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351248397607 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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