Some people believe that studying at university or college is best route to a successful career while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school Discuss both view

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e many people believe that continuing to university or college studies is the bes...
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...rganizing skill, critical thinking skill,... I am an epitome of this as I particip...
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...l and broaden my social network. Thus, I have a wonderful and fantastic job when ...
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...iners from academies and businesses will help students to learn and have the chan...
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...rdresser, chief, flight attendant, sales,... don’t require the undergraduate degre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, still, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, no doubt, sort of, such as, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2172.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 413.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25907990315 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89546937666 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569007263923 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 674.1 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.5649892901 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.666666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9444444444 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1111111111 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213927849025 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671233509991 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0943363337657 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213927849025 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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