In some countries, few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
it is said that there are more benefits to country if only several people get salary sap. however, the opponents of this statement believe that governments ought to manage the amount of their citizens' salaries. From my poin of view, the former state is true as it can reduce the costs of other things and governments can spend their badged to improve other parts of society.
To begin with, only few people earn a lots of money, however, this is advantageous for both people and governments. The main reason is that the majority of people earn less money and, in other words, governments spend less money to them. this is an opportunity for other aspects of country like medicine or technology to improve. As for citizens , the costs of living is somehow related to salaries, and they also be cheaper correspondingly. Thus,it is beneficial if people's salaries are low.
Admittedly, it cannot always be advantageous since the value of people's work is prone to be underestimated. The reason is that many people often exaggerate. A typical example of this is a situation when things cost cheap, people do not thank but instead they think that product should have somthing wrong. Despite this, giving low salary has more prons that cons. Therefore, it is not serious problem and not many people claim about their low salaries.
By way of conclusion, i personally consider that even though there may be some drawback of giving high salary to few and governments ought not have to change system of salaries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, as for, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1256.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90625 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66246824388 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57421875 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.260719453 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7142857143 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.410840107326 0.244688304435 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126231626112 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598215415919 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221681045274 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582226789292 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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