The chart below shows what anthropology graduate from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years Summarize the information by selecting and reporting th

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The chart below shows what anthropology graduate from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The pie chart illustrates the proportion of destinations of anthropology graduates from one university, and the table shows how much salaries of anthropology student after 5 years’ work based on their salaries. Overall, it can be seen that a lot of Anthropology graduates works a full-time job. It can also be seen after graduation they have a decent salary.
Based on the pie chart, more than a half of Anthropology graduates tend to works for a full-time job, while less than a fifth of anthropology students tend to have a part-time work after graduating. At 8%, of anthropology graduates also tend to have a full-time postgrad study after graduation, and 5% of anthropology graduates, have a postgrad study but also works a part-time job.
After 5 years’ work, Anthropology graduates make salaries in a range of 25.000 and more than 100.000. After calculation, 40% of Anthropology graduates after 5 years of work have a salary of 100.000, while there’s not a lot of graduates who have salaries in between 25.000-49.000. In summary, being a freelance consultant, governor sector, and private companies after 5 years work make a decent salary for anthropology graduates.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 129, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...one university, and the table shows how much salaries of anthropology student after ...
^^^^
Line 2, column 76, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'work'.
Suggestion: work
... half of Anthropology graduates tend to works for a full-time job, while less than a ...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, in summary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 991.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16145833333 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24177227093 2.65546596893 122% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473958333333 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 303.3 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7125163031 43.030603864 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.875 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300350309651 0.215688989381 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163228501721 0.103423049105 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860526646093 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225698733501 0.15604864568 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702103766005 0.0819641961636 86% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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